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This is my persuasive paragraph.

Mathsland Council planning committee 2324 Jalan Lalalastreet Mathsland 3241 May 22, 2007

Dear valued planning committee,

For the citizens of Mathsland I would like to establish a new park called, “Lalala Park.” This park is a park like never before, you will never get bored of it, there is this humongous playground where you can let our little children laugh and climb around having fun. For all the older children they can play sports or go for a swim in the river and of coarse, having fun. For the adults, they can walk around in the park, also there are no problems with people with crutches or wheel chairs because there are ramps that will help them get up without having to carry their chairs or crutches with someone helping. There are also a lot of animals that will be part of nature and they won’t cause any problems with the people who are eating at the benches. These animals aren’t dangerous at all they are pretty tame so you can tame them, but remember to wash your hands after. Another thing is to not throw away your rubbish in to nature, there are a lot of trash cans. I hope that after you read this letter, I hope you can go see the park, I’m sure you’ll like it a lot.

Sincerely the park designer,

Thomas Mentink